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Thursday 8 March 2012

no16 STORIES - DM2C

ASSIGNMENT 
- Discussion 9/3/2012

Target Audience: 
Family

USE NON-HUMAN CHARACTERS
Hero - JACK >> NERD
Heroine - JILL >> MS SUNSHINE
Villain - ALEX (male/female - up to you) 
Comic Relief - BOB / CHERRY (male/female - optional)

1 SENTENCE SUMMARY:


Alex - 2 families, who dun like each other, want to keep a magical sunflower that happens to grow along the fence in their backyards.


Jeremy - Hamsters wants to find a way to get to the moon


Pratama - Nerdy alien Jack helps Jill retrieve (item) taken by a bully Alex so that she can take part in the dragon race competition.


Pei Ling - Jack and Jill fight against evil Alex to ... ????


JJ - Jack (an urban bird, duh dad) must find his lost egg before his wife comes back from the market (he doesn't want his wife to find out he has lost the egg)

Yasmin - Jack, brainy caterpillar (late bloomer) must find the best spot to turn into a cocoon so that he can be a butterfly like the rest of his friends, esp Jill (most attractive caterpillar) 


Mai - Jack and Jill wants to steal their neighbour's balloons to throw a party for their parents


Andrea - Jack (short beansprout) & Jill (short sunflower) must steal the photosynthetizer growth machine from Alex (short cabbage)


Darren - Jack (dark elf) & Jill (night elf) must stop Alex (thief - fairy??) from stealing their magic (eg magic can grow elf veg or alex's cow for strawberry milk)


Clement - Jack (chihuahua - geek) learns how to be as sunny as Jill (golden retriever - ms sunshine) to stand up (how?) to big bully Alexis (doberman - villain) in his own way


Gilang - Hungry Jack & Jill (birds) tries to steal corn but Alex (scarecrow robot) stops them every time (notes: see coyote & bugs bunny).


Serafina - Jack (sloth), Jill (hummingbird) and Alex (rhino - wants ALL the cheesecake) have to share Cherry's famous cheesecake during a tea party.



nicholas - Jack & Jill (honey bees) must compete (or work together?) with Alex (butterfly) to collect as much nectar as possible from a field of flowers.


josep - A dragon called Jill is forced to kidnap a princess (Cherry, comic relief?) to save her father, Jack from Alex, a mean witch. Jill ends up teaming up with the princess to save Jack.

Firdaus - Jack must beat champion Alex (does he cheat?) to win an exciting game competition to impress Jill. 

(maybe jill wins in the end? but dun have to put this info into the 1 sentence).

Mastura - Jill (bakes cookies?) needs Jack to help her sell cookies to earn more money to buy a tricycle but Alex (tmaybe he tries to steal Jill's freshly baked cookies?) gets in their way.

Badhriya - Jack (private detective hired by Jill's father) must catch Alex red-handed to prove that Alex (Alex is maybe engaged to Jill?) wants to con Jill of her inheritance... (pls let me know if this is what you might want to write). thanks!


Yiling - Jack (mouse) wants to steal Alex's (cat) cake for Jill (love interest)


Michael - Sprites jack and jill wake up from hibernation, only to realize that winter has not ended and that the forest is going to die unless they... (specific details here) ..... 

Darren - Elves jack and jill must work together to stop alex from stealing the magic (item) from their forest (zoom in to a specific place, world is too big lol).

Hariz - (using elements like water, ice and fire to animate is not too suitable for your kitchen story - better to be animating kitchen items like forks, spoons, plates, sponge, teacups, etc )

who have i missed?
>>> AKASH... lol where is your 1 sentence? as at 24/3/2012

6 comments:

  1. Michael Agung Elkana
    DM2C F10DM0722

    Two forest sprites; Jack & Jill, awaken from hibernation, and realizing that winter has not yet ended given the fact that it is already March, threatening the life inside the forest, so together they must find the culprit behind the whole mystery.

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    1. great start michael!! u need to be a little more specific abt the threat.

      what threatens the forest?
      what must they do or else...?

      eg. jack and jill wake up from hibernation, only to realize that winter has not ended and that the forest is going to die unless they... (specific details here) .....

      can you work on the above? thanks!

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  2. Alexander Sinnelius
    DM2C F10DM0650

    Two neighboring families, who were strangers to each others, found a magical sunflower that grow right in between their backyards and both compete to acquire the sunflower.

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    1. yup the main gist of the story is there!!

      how about...

      2 neighbours (dun have to be families) compete/try to own a magical sunflower...

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  3. Darren Low Jian Sheng
    DM2C F10DM0174

    In order to be immortal , evil mistress Alex plot to steal all the magic away from the world,the two elf Jack and Jill got to work together to stop this from happening.

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    1. let's focus on the key character and his/her motive...

      elves jack and jill must work together to stop alex from stealing the magic (item) from their forest (zoom in to a specific place, world is too big lol).

      wat do you think?

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